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for Severus\'s Trip

by ronsmistress

person Persy
schedule August 24, 2021 at 12:00 AM

A beautiful love story.

schedule February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story! So I hope you keep writing and maybe write stories for fanfiction.net and Ashwinder websites.
person Alyssa
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!! Loved it from beginning to end!!
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your Severus and Hermione were great. Never liked Ron with Hermione for all of the reasons mentioned in your story. While I would not have liked it if Hermione ended up with Ron, it still brought a tear to my eye. I guess it is just sad knowing that when you leave a badwas part of your past behind, you leave the good parts too. Your story was very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing. p
schedule June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A absolutely fantastic story, I am so happy I found it!!!
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am very glad you went back and edited this so that I got a chance to see it. This was fun, endearing, and loving. I am really glad I chanced upon it. Thank you! HG4eva
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You did a nice job, it was very smooth. I admit I've read it several times in the original form but hadn't really reviewed (bad me)I can hardly tell where you made alterations, frankly. Still a damn good story.
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew! *Gasps for air* Holy Merlin... you certainly know how to write a hot sex scene!
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was an amazing story. You absolutely have to do a sequal. I hope you do! Great writing!

Tiffany

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