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by soldiersgirl0709

person Citten
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ONLY 7!?!?! that cant be possible! i will just know i will want more! (i always do though.) well two things then one-i do hope that you will be posting and soon! two-if only 7 chapters to go, do you have a sequel planned? :)
person ginnyginny
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor hermione... giving up her chance at happiness due to guilt and a feeling of obligation to ron. i feel bad for ron too, for he helped create the need within hermione that lucius seemed to fill. i feel terrible for lucius as well... now stuck in a marriage to a woman who will remind him every day of the love and potential life that he lost. i don't feel much towards narcissa, except contempt... hopefully she will leave him. maybe draco will intercede and help get hermione and lucius together, seeing his father in such despair. looking forward to the next chapters!
person smmz79
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow what a chap... i can not believe that it happened like this.... what in the world is going to happen i doubt lucius will give up on her or allow her to do this wow while she was holding ron her heart was breaking for lucius...
person smmz79
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg what in the hell she really is very vindictive.... wow great chap... can not wait to see what happens next
person maddie50
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, the jig is up! The tryst against the door was fabulous, though. What a way to go.
person Lady Disdain
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg, you can't leave us hanging here! That's soo omg!! I'd sooo love to see an update!
person KellyJCR
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a Bitch! Ron and Narcissa have every right to be pissed off but, Narcissa gives new meaning to the word livid. I'm not sure why Hermione conceded so easily to Rons request to never see Lucius again. I would think that being married one would want to exhaust all possibilities before calling an end to a marriage. Hermione seems to be in love with Lucius however, does she really want her old relationship with Ron back, they were in love not so long ago. Is the fact that she has come clean to Ron about everything she has been feeling and thinking change the situation with her need for Lucius. I feel so torn I want her marriage to work and I want her in a relationship with Lucius an wer both know that isn't possible. How do you make your mind up as an author? Naricssa on the other had needs to let go of all the resentment and anger she has for Lucius. She loved him once and she has let herself become obsessed with the payback she so despretley wants. I think she want Lucius to be as miserable as she seems to be, at this point I don't think she gets any joy from anything or anybody. Maybe Draco will open his eyes and step in. I am dying to see the aftermath. Well done!!!!
person Lady Disdain
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so ..... I have no word for it ;) Wonderful story,. Really wonderful., I soo hope you have a happy ending in mind, i really hate miserable endings., :( let them come together pwetty please *puppydog eyes*
person kayleigh
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When I should be studying for my finals, your story has been one very delightful study break for me. I really hope that everything will work out for Hermione and Lucius, they deserve to be happy and have children! I look forward to your next post!
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't fret? Don't fret? I am bawling! I know it's the right thing to do and all that, but I find myself not caring in the least!

Great chapters!

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