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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely again! I so like this story :) I'm sorry to hear you've got an infection,. get well soon!
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now, that was just ... *fans self* ... just hot!
It's definitely looking up!
A relationship involves a lot of effort and when one part of the couple is just not putting any effort in, the other one will burn out soon. So I say: Ron and Narcissa have at least partly brought this on themselves. Ditch them! (And give me more of this wonderful smut - what? No, no, I am not egoistic...)
It's definitely looking up!
A relationship involves a lot of effort and when one part of the couple is just not putting any effort in, the other one will burn out soon. So I say: Ron and Narcissa have at least partly brought this on themselves. Ditch them! (And give me more of this wonderful smut - what? No, no, I am not egoistic...)
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very erotic. Waiting for more!
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I absolutely love your Lucius. Secondly, I wish they would have sex already. The tension between them is nearing it's breaking point and even I am starting to feel frustrated! lol This is a great story, I can't wait for more!
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, a secret, not so secret, meeting in the library! hehehe
I think Ron is having an affair too...with Lavander. Is he?
You know, I gotta tell you, I'm glad that you're really descriptive with your stories. I can picture exactly what you're writing as I read. Like when you say Lucius was barefoot, in trousers and white shirt, stalking around. I mean, as I read it, I pictured it. A lot of authors, even the published ones, don't do that. For me it's really enjoyable.
30 chapters? Okay, cool. Sounds good. What's the new story you're working on? I mean what "ship" is it?
I think Ron is having an affair too...with Lavander. Is he?
You know, I gotta tell you, I'm glad that you're really descriptive with your stories. I can picture exactly what you're writing as I read. Like when you say Lucius was barefoot, in trousers and white shirt, stalking around. I mean, as I read it, I pictured it. A lot of authors, even the published ones, don't do that. For me it's really enjoyable.
30 chapters? Okay, cool. Sounds good. What's the new story you're working on? I mean what "ship" is it?
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, now it gets interesting...lol! Im loving this story Goddess. Its funny because despite your fear of us hating this story and the characters for having an affair, I just want them to get together. Can't wait for the next update!
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, two brilliant chapters. I liked Draco, he seemed genuine...if that's that right choice of words. Hermione tormented (I can relate to some extent) is beautifully painful to read. Thanks for the double update.
Your comment to me made me smile. You know how sometimes a wondefully written piece of fan fiction can speak to you on such a real level that it's unnerving? That would be this story. Thanks again! Read ya Tuesday. :)
Your comment to me made me smile. You know how sometimes a wondefully written piece of fan fiction can speak to you on such a real level that it's unnerving? That would be this story. Thanks again! Read ya Tuesday. :)
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so beautiful. I cry for their pain, and celebrate each victory. Every chapter I find another damaged layer peeled away and they heal just a bit more. I'm really happy to see that Lucius and Draco aren't as estranged as I originally thought. I'm afraid I'm not very good at reviews (I worry that I may sound insincere), but I think that this story may be one of your best. I'm also greedy, I'm eagerly looking forward to your Remus story. I hope you and your family enjoy a good Thanksgiving.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Draco is a bit of a twat but I hope he gets better. He seems like he could be. I don't know why but a very naive part of me just wants everyone to be happy in this story.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read all of this in one shot because it is superb. I sincerely hope you will continue with it.