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Chapters 1-7: When I read your warnings, I admit I was hesitant. I

I can see how these "go together". Great update hun, and definately looking forward to your next one. This is a very moving story and I was very happy to hear that it has a happy ending. I'm a junkie for the sappy stories with happy endings. To me it's not finished if the ending is right. But you never let me down in that area. I am sorry to hear you lost children, thats never easy to deal with. I lost a brother, but thankfully in my case I was too young to realize it. My mother never got over it fully. No mother should have to bury their child, and I pray every day I never have to do that to my 2 little boys.

Anyway, very realistic hun, you're doing great as usual!

Again I must say you have a way with words. These two chapters show the awakening of both Lucius and Hermione as if from a long tortured sleep. Neither of their spouses have found away to truly communicate with them. They seem more inclined to pass judgment and dig deeper into the misery of their circumstances, instead of trying to fight their way back into the light and back to each other. I absolutely love it so far and can

Aww, poor Hermione. I know how she feels, trying to be intimate, and not feeling anything. I also know how Ron feels, I've been on that side too. Its all very sad.

I'm soooo happy to be reading a new Lucis/hermione fic!
I hope you explain further in another chapter the reason of Oliver's death, or is it going to stay a mistery?
And I have to say, I hate Ron and Narcissa!

I hate to say this, but i noticed a mistake in chapter 4, I think. Where Lucius asks Hermione how old the baby would have been, you wrote a week, but hasn't it been a year already? Well, just thought you should know!

I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter! Keep up the good work ;) lol

Oh you weren't wrong almost needed tissues for chapter 4, that was a very moving dialogue. Having been anticipating this story since you described it before. Can already feel the love and angst radiating from them. Can't wait for more. As ever thank you for feeding my addiction.
Lu

I lost six babies before giving birth to my beautiful daughter. You described my feelings exactly, in the way you wrote Hermione's pain. Luckily I had a wonderful husband who grieved with me.

Even though I had a lump in my throat I thoroughly enjoyed (as per usual)the opening 5 chapters. Will be checking every day for the eagerly awaited update.

Best wishes,
Donavon.

Oh wow wow wow!
This is fantastic!
Very sad, but very realistic, and just the right pace.
I'm so glad you have started this story, because I am having my tonsills out next week, so I will be holed up at home. But at least I will have this to read!

I feel sorry for Ron, I think he is a fantastic character, and I hope he gets a happy ending too.

I LOVE THIS! I know it's going to be a hard road to travel, reading it with all the character emotions involved...a lost child, lost loves, the discovery of new friendships. I'm very excited to see how this will all play out.

Looking forward to your next update! (Tuesday, right?)
MHS

Even though I was warned, almost immediately I was crying. The tone of this story is so different from anything else I