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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HO-LY carp! What size brush was it that Hermione just painted him with? Well, even if he was a Death Eater, our smart girl should've figured out by now that there's more to him than meets the eye. I'm SO frustrated with her right now--talking herself out of the right answer. It's like... it's like... me on a multiple choice exam! Shameful. I hope to God he sets her straight soon. Enjoy your time in TN, I hope the winter storm misses you.
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Poor Snape. Hermione just keeps hitting him below the belt. Pummelling, more like. Thanks for adding that bit about Billy in! Haha, eating all of his professor's cookies.... As always, I look forward to reading more! ~M
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that something great is gonna happen in the next chapter and I think you know what I mean when I say great lol...and the thought of Snape wanting a puppy for Christmas when he was a kid is absolutely hilarious...great update and I hope that Starbucks gives you that wifi, at least for our sakes lol
person neelix
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is there a possibility, even a glimmer, that Severus will eventually want out of his ceel so he live a proper married life with Hermione? I am guessing he is falling (has fallen?) in love with her already?

Still very absorbed with this - and I love your writing style. It's so eloquent. not that I'm jealous or anything... *shakes head with fingers crossed behind back*
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely chapter :) I adore the idea of Severus sharing his books. It's like it little kid school, when abully shared hisbuilding blocks or go joes :) cute.
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Top of the line! Truly! Please do continue!
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, I understand this logic! They tend to make her an innocent little virgine, don't they? I think it's removed from reality, because even if I think that she probably is the kind of girl to graduate from Hogwarts and still being a virgine, I don't think she'd wait until she gets married. That is just so... Old fashioned and in some cases prude. I don't picture her like that...

I like how you slowly advance the story. It's not hurried, and I think it's exactly how a relationship between Hermione and Severus would develop if there ever were any. Billy seems to be a nice kid (well, probably not kid - but he certainly has some child-like features - at least that's what I imagine). I wonder what you will do with him. Am I mistaken if I think that there might be more with hime?
person Gertie
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank the Gods for your regular updates. I
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.

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