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by Necoco

person anniea
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am very sorry to have to say this but...............GET A GODDAMN BETA!!!!!!!!!! That was terrible, I don't know what you wrote your story under but it should have at least had a spelling and grammar checker on it! If I were you, I would definitely get Microsoft Word installed into your computer before you try to write anymore. I mean, it was just so sad! I normally don't even read PWP's but I wanted to see what this one was about and I was terribly dissapointed!
person sanda
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story

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