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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is truly a masterpiece. Its mix between plot and sex is perferct.
Some suggestions/wishes.
1. Don't make Harry too powerful too fast. It would be boring if there's no challenge.
A long time ago, on a website far far away, I read story and, well, it started good, but I thought that jis heroine was more powerful tha Yoda, Obi-Wan, Sidious, Vader, Revan and whover combined. That ruined the story.
2. Harry should'nt have too many girls so soon. The first year isn't finished and he already has much minions/slaves/apprentices. The only persond that shoudl join is Penny and maybe the two Hufflepuff girls.
After all, too many girls would distract him from his ambition, wouldn't they?;)
3. Will the Tri-Wizard-Cup play a role in your story? If so, Harry should definitely make Fleur Delacour one of his apprentices.
Now, I'm really anxious for the next chapter. How you'll release it soon. ;)
Some suggestions/wishes.
1. Don't make Harry too powerful too fast. It would be boring if there's no challenge.
A long time ago, on a website far far away, I read story and, well, it started good, but I thought that jis heroine was more powerful tha Yoda, Obi-Wan, Sidious, Vader, Revan and whover combined. That ruined the story.
2. Harry should'nt have too many girls so soon. The first year isn't finished and he already has much minions/slaves/apprentices. The only persond that shoudl join is Penny and maybe the two Hufflepuff girls.
After all, too many girls would distract him from his ambition, wouldn't they?;)
3. Will the Tri-Wizard-Cup play a role in your story? If so, Harry should definitely make Fleur Delacour one of his apprentices.
Now, I'm really anxious for the next chapter. How you'll release it soon. ;)
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn, that was a good chapter.
Love seeing Hermione claiming her spot =)
Love seeing Hermione claiming her spot =)
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, i gotta say i really love this story. every single word. i was wondering of two things; do you have a mailing list, and if you do, could you add me? (extraho_606@hotmail.com)
and
when you have completed the story, could you post the entire thing in one 'chapter' right at the end, so i can copy/paste it into a word document and read it again when i don't have internett access - as i dont quite often. i live on an island, literally. THANK YOU
and
when you have completed the story, could you post the entire thing in one 'chapter' right at the end, so i can copy/paste it into a word document and read it again when i don't have internett access - as i dont quite often. i live on an island, literally. THANK YOU