rate_review Reviews

pretty good! keep writing!

It's Zabini.

Well I feel like I have been teased! The open sounds interesting even though I have no idea where you are planning to go with this. Marriage Law maybe? I am just tossing a guess out there I really have no idea. Anyway I think you have talent as a writer and should continue. You had a few spelling errors but over all you painted an interesting picture. Let me just say this. Please! Please! Please! Do not get 5 or 10 chapters into the story and abandon it. I have started so many stories that are awesome and have not been touched in months or years. I realize life happens but if you decide to continue with the story (which I think could be really great) please commit to finishing it; I do not know how many more teases I can take. All in All thanks for the nice work and I hope you continue.

i liked it!