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for Scarred Souls

by iluvmysato

person Ryou
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Weird. My first reaction to this was Harry was being polyjuiced. XD It was hot but so abrupt.

Hm...was Harry being impersonated? It seemed like he went from IC to being strange. Maybe he had an epiphany? :/
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love you, will you marry me?
Please?
I'll make the ring out of cookie dough!
-KP
person Jenova625
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Because I'm too busy rolling around, spewing hearts, squeeing like a fangirl...I'm only going to say one thing: I LOVE YOU! *o* I love the way you write, you're one of my favorite authors ^_^

I really loved the twist in this chapter. I never expected Harry to start speaking Parsletongue XD That was awesome! I spent about a third of that sex scene worried that Harry might throw Sev out, but I guess he's sort of incapable of that level of spitefulness, isn't he? ^^; I really hope they keep this cohesive relationship, I really don't want them to fight anymore. I mean--I really love the depth it gives their dynamic but it really makes me want to knock their heads together sometimes, you know? XD

ARGH--and Colin Creevy is SUCH a creeper >_<; I love that! XD

Never stop writing ^_^

P.S. Here's some delicious internetz cookies for being awesome! (>^_^)>~O
person mre-quecky
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Finally! Beautiful chapter, absolutelz loved it! Lika crazy!
person JC Black
schedule May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW GREAT keep up the good wor....
person Elvira
schedule May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WHOOP WHOOP!

They got together!

Loved it!

Update soon!!!
person Darkless
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story so far. I just love snarky Snape suddenly turning passionate, surprising even himself. I await more with aniticipation.
person Elvira
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I read this in one sitting.

I love all the hostility and then how they show that they somewhat care for each other.

Please update soon@!!!!!!
person Reviewer
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay I seriously love you for updating so fas and for another amazing chapter. The line about Severus imaginig Harry yielding was so sad--he did! And I love the matchmaking twins. I love that severus is seeing into Harry's past, and the line about Severus feeling lighter was great but then Harry walked through the door and I wanted to hit him. Adore his story and even though I wish they were together I'm loving the journey you're taking us on and that they're havin to work for it, because hat makes it so much more worthwhile in the end. Thanks so much for th great read!
person neelix
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So close... I can feel the angst from here. Please, let them fall in love, already/!

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