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by LadyBlueEyes

person mlui
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly sad how Hermione was so haunted. I can't believe Neville didn't say something...what happened to his Gryffindor courage? I hope you'll write a sequel of when he /does/ find her!! Please?? =)
person amsev
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You seriously need to write more to this story. Excellent one-shot but could also be an excellent beginning to a longer story.
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW - powerful...you should do a follow-up. Beautifully written and such emotion. Draco's characterization and his response to Hermione was so real. I could almost see him on that precipice.
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really loved it and would like more please!
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful and incredible, please continue it, That last lines had me squealing. CONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you can continue this - I want to know what happens after the war.............And where was the warning that we'd need tissues for this one??????? That was just so sad!!!! I don't like to see a broken Hermione - I want her fixd. :)

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