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lol that was awsome .. please pleased update soon ... later for now

angel

Great chapters, keep it up...and I still like all the kids it makes it more interesting, and fun.

This is a nice story but there are waaay too many children. Two children maybe three. But nearly eight children is a little too much. And I cant imagine Severus wanting that many as Harry having that many. But other than that this is a nice story.

You have quite a good story - little short on the chapter, and a bit put off by all the children (just seems out of character for Snape to have so many, plus it's hard to remember names and I have to wonder how much character devleopment seven new characters can get). It seems original enough though and it's interesting, so I look forward to more to see where this goes.

I love stories were they have a whole family, I hope you write more too this story, You are doing great keep it up and I hope you post soon.