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by elfhybrid

person Jill
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh you have soooo sooooo got to continue!!!
person sonykit
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think you should continue with this. with such a short piece it almost seemed like a drabble, you managed to convey depth to harry's character. the conflict and the resolution and how you wrote it in all of harry's confused/ enlightened state of mind was good. i especially like harry's courage and sudden inspired dominance to just go get draco, the last line was especially intriguing.
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it!

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