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RE: chapter ten

Poor Neville for being married to Harry the-grass-is-greener-on-the-other-side-of-the-fence Potter.

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Good God Gertie, Hermione is acting like some sort of rabid beast that is in heat.

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I do like Lucius' sexy domineering of Hermione and while helping her to have an orgasm getting her to agree to behave herself and have herself available to him; especially if she is not putting out for Draco.


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I love this part...

'"Now, I would enjoy having you put your naughty mouth to work."

Lucius rolled over so she was on top of him stretched between his legs.

RE: chapter eleven

Mmm, I love how deliciously detailed the passionate portions of the story are as they really get the blood pumping and the juices flowing.
*WINK-WINK-NUDGE-NUDGE...*
;~D

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I like Lucius' solution to Hermione being able to have both of the Malfoy men as hers.

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RE: chapter twelve

*::purring::*
Hermione is one lucky lady to have been whisked off to the bathroom by Lucius and then given quite the tongue lashing--wickedly naughty wizard--FREAKING lucky Hermione!
;~D

*::cackling::*
I love how pervy Merlin's portrait is to Hermione, that it, or rather his image, can do magic and project his voice into Hermione's head. Merlin is such a horny old goat to be asking Hermione to show him her bits, ask her to have sex with her wizards in front of him, to pleasure herself in front of him, and let us not forget to flash him her breasts as he pleasures himself.
;~D

I think that it is funny how Hermione refuses to believe that the painting is of Merlin because of how lewdly he has interacted with Hermione.

Aww, just when the sexy beasts (Lucius and Draco) are starting to share Hermione, Merlin goes and spoils it by projecting his voice/thoughts into Hermione's head.

Mmm, Merlin's younger self sounds absolutely dishy. Hermione should be thanking her lucky stars that his sexiness was passed down to his descendants.

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RE: chapter six

Ok, so what does 'Amor omnia vincit' mean when translated into English?

Lucius is so sexy and sweet with Hermione--lucky girl!

Great chapter--well done--keep up the good work!

RE: chapter one

*::laughing uproariously::*
OMG--too freaking funny--good riddance to bad rubbish! I'm so very glad that Hermione is free of the disgusting sample of wizardhood (not sure if that sounds right, but I'm sure that you get what I'm trying to say).

Great first chapter--keep up the good work!

RE: chapter two

Eww, talk about tacky and in complete bad taste, Molly and the Weasleys went all out for the wedding/wake.

Hurray! Gold digger/skank extraordinaire is dead and unable to complete her nefarious plans for Harry, Neville and their adopted children.

Lucius is such a sweetheart to have provided Hermione a graceful out of the ugly situation at the Burrow.

Great story so far--well done--keep up the good work!

RE: chapter three

Wow, Crookshanks has sure taken a liking to the two scrumptious Malfoy men.
:)

I love the extreme contrasts made between the Weasleys and the Malfoys.

It was very sweet of Draco to have been man enough to have apologized for his behavior during their years at Hogwarts.

Well done--keep up the good work!

RE: chapter four

I love how Hermione is attracted to both of the goregous specimens of studly manliness, and they in turn, attracted to her.
:)

Mmm, Draco has such passion for Hermione and a desire to pleasure her--lucky girl.

Aww, how sweet that Blaise had a crush on Hermione but being unable to figure out how to go about expressing himself to her, went about sabotaging her class work hoping that she would ask him for assistance.

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*SQUEE*
'He would give her an orgasm without penetrating her if he could.' <--Lucius' thoughts

WooHoo, lucky girl Hermione to have such a sexy beast of a man wanting to give you such a delious experience.
;~D

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*::chuckling::*
Poor Draco getting kicked by his father for attempting to play footsie with Hermione.
:p

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*::cackling::*
I love how both of the Malfoy men are in lust with Hermione and are vying for her attention, and Draco's reaction to his father's subtle flirting.
... 'Draco was seething. Only his good manners stopped him from grunting like a cave man and dragging his bride away.'

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OMG, Narcissa was a cruel and sick b-itch to have done what she did...
'The stupid wench went and took a potion to keep from ever menstruating again.'

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I love how wicked Lucius and Hermione both are in their thoughts regarding the other.
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Lucius: 'Lucius loved to ponder about the what-ifs of his life. What if he'd been a professor in Hogwarts? Then he could've seduced Miss Granger...'
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and
Hermione: 'What would it be like to touch that soft hair?

To grip it while he...would he go down on her? Ron never had...she had always wondered what the sensation would feel like, to have a boy

RE: chapter five

A very sexy and yet frustrating chapter for all--I love it!
;~D

Well done--keep up the good work!

Love it Love it Love it, is kind of funny on a part because they cann't be apart but also cann't be together due to the constant fights.. Please only one recuest, put Harry to rest making him happy with Neville of something or discovering that Draco is really straight.Please