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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start. But I do recommend that you use a beta to help with the tiny spelling and grammar errors. looking forward to more. Dark Draco is smexy.
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Explosive second chapter. What will Draco do to make her love him? I hope they have a happy ending (though it might dark for everyone else...oh well).
PS: I still recommend a beta. And maybe limit the "sss" on Voldemort's verbiage, its a bit tough to get through -- all you needed to do it allude to how he sounds like a hissing snake, each "sss" is elongated in an extended hiss. Or something like that.
Looking for chapter 3.
PS: I still recommend a beta. And maybe limit the "sss" on Voldemort's verbiage, its a bit tough to get through -- all you needed to do it allude to how he sounds like a hissing snake, each "sss" is elongated in an extended hiss. Or something like that.
Looking for chapter 3.
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooo. I like it. you definitely need to post more!
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i read this before when you had it up and when i saw it again i did a happy dance! this is a great story with a great plot. can not wait for more.
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't know if I reviewed before, but I do remember reading this story, at least this first chapter. Hopefully, you'll upload the other chapters soon. :D
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH! I like this...please continue!
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter.
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it and can't wait for the next chapter I hope it comes out soon!
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooo - a dark fic....I like that, hey as long as it all Dramione all the way, I'm good. It's only fan fic anyway. LOL - more please.