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for The Engagement Kiss

by SexyKittyLovesCum

schedule February 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was very good... now on to the sequel!
person Lumcer
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! so unique and genuien (sp?) :D Thank you so much for finishing it. the babies names were sweet and different (that is a nice change from the usual.) I love that you found an alternet way of ending the war, and that everyone came out okay. :D oh btw I just adore Az :D :D :D

KCK-Lumcer
person L. Maurel
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I came up to chapter eleven until I couldn't restrain myself from writing a review. Unfortunately I am not quite sure whether it is positiv or not.
Anyway, I'm afraid I'm rather confused. How can one be both unconscious and awake?
Maybe I haven't yet properly understood the whole text, thought I was sure I did.
I am not a native speaker and the level of my English is barely above the level of B2 - at best it comes up to C1.
Furthermore, I don't understand what the two "Ander" say to Harry. I think you wrote "me hirm". I looked it up in a dictionary but couldn't find anything.
By the way, are aware of the fact that "Zwerg" is a German word? It means dwarf, and, in my opinion, a rather idiosyncratic name for a house-elf.
person cobweb
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story so far.
The only thing that is bothering me is Wish is not
spelled with a wh. The last few chapters have had the word whish
several times.

other than that and Dumbledore...
person rebecca
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aviva is hebrew for spring. It's the name of the bbg chapter I was in.
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Thanks so much for this fic! It was utterly enjoyable!
I can't wait for the sequal!
person Orkchild
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely ending to a lovely story. Can't wait to start the next.
person Nikte
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So when will the twins be born? In the the Hermione/Naji epilogue or the sequel? *evil grin* I think I can already hear the screams of protest from your devoted fans if you make them wait that long but it might be a good enough insentive to bring them back for more. Your call.
person Fuuhaizu
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww...... i luuuuurv it!!!thank you for writing such a wonderful and creative story, and i love the original characters and touches that you have added to the snarry-ness......but please, ma'am, may i have some more? i really like the plot and everything.....and i think that there should be a sequel or...something!!!! .....................................please? thanks!!
--the Fuu

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