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by Digitallace

person ThePinkLady
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For the first time in this whole story I really feel sorry for Ginny. Oh Harry, get it together and listen to the pregnant lady!!! I wonder how Draco's doing... Anywany, please keep writing, clearly I'm in love with the characters and their little drama
person Tree
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes...dim indeed! I really thought things couldn't get worse for them...and then it did! As a credit to you...definatly not in a way I was expecting, either. Awesome! Can't wait for the next harrowing installment!
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay this is the very first time in the history of me reading fanfics that i am completly PISSSED at a one Harry J. Potter!
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 9!!!
person ThePinkLady
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Urgh, Harry is (to put it as nicely as I can) a gigantic DUNDERHEAD! Ginny is less of a bitch in this chapter though so I can imagine why it might be hard for him to leave her. I want to say 'poor Draco' but well Mr Frenchy seems uber hot and it looks like he was just the perfect thing to force Harry's head from out of his own ass. Great stuff, can't wait for the next chapters.
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sooo love this story though it breaks my heart! I gotta have chapter 8!
person Alyssa
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, what a funny name, French Fancypants! Stupid that he was drooling over Ginny - or the other way around. i hope that they will end up together, so that Draco will be with Harry. I hope that'll be soon.. i like the way you write out of harry's perspective, it just seems so natural to me, just the way Harry is. Also Hermoine at the end, although it didn't fit her that she would help him cut things off with Ginny. Hoping the next chapter will be here quickly!!!

schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mr. Fancypants sounds yummy lol

update soon??? Im really loving this story!
person MewMew2
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic job! I must say, I love 'Mr French fancy pants.' :) *snorts at the name* Thank you so much for updating once more, as always it was a pleasure to read. Please do so again when possible.
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Poor Draco... *smacks Harry in the head so that he'll get a clue*

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