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This is a great story and I would like to see it continued.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Please continue this fanfic! I can't wait to read how his obsession for Hermione will progress.

Hi! Ok...so let me see if I can get my rather jumbled...Im in the middle of writing and plot bunnies are attacking me in droves....thoughts into something understandable. First off, I will admit I was a bit hesitant to have a peek when I saw the Minor warning, If it's with an older character I prefer her to be of age or at least 17, but I looked anyhow and am glad I did. I was relieved to see that your Severus wasnt attracted to a child, but the potential woman he saw inside her. I like that his obsession wasnt sexual but it was more of an intellectual attraction.


I think that if the muse directs you further that you have a story here worth exploring. But I know that sometimes she doesnt take you any deeper than that and that is perfectly ok too. I will keep an eye open however, just in case you decide to dig a little deeper into the tale.


Happy Writing!!!
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Love it!! Can't wait for more to come!! Update soon! Please and thank you!!

i'm going with more little tidbits. This possibly stuff is definitely not allowed ;-)

Wow. Very good :) you should have a chapter for each year at least... Then maybe a ton for once he gets her or something like that LOL


Very good chapter :)