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So far you have a good start I think. I don't know if you meant to format it like that, but if not might I suggest how I do it? I write it in word and then do a save as to html. When I upload the html file it holds the formatting I put in it. If you don't care, no worries. lol I do hope to see more soon though. Thanks!

Hi - just found your story and was about to read it but if I may give you a reader-friendly tip. Please split your paragraphs into readable sizes and space them out. Right now your story is one long run on and I don't know how many readers your going to get who will stick with it. You might want to repost this after separating your paragraphs/splitting them.