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for The Heart\'s Desire

by soldiersgirl0709

person triz
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved the story! it had a good dose of humor in it. love, love, loved it!
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! I prefer Severus to be just the way you wrote him. Please leave it up... I like to revisit favorites from time to time!
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! It was such a sweet story- and VERY hot (I would expect nothing less from you)
I got to the end wanting more!
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was a great oneshot xxx

Brillant writing as always xx
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was looking for just such a story, it was funny, lite and hot! I hope that you keep it up and I would like to know what story you have in the works.
person Gertie
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A dozen long-stemmed Slytherins for my favorite fic author ever. This reminds me of your earliest stories. Something about Snape and the way they come together. It was a wonderful early V-Day surprise.
person Aundree'a
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this one. Very well written. I loved how his strength to deny her withered away until he couldn't help himself!
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww, that's very cute!
funny spell, lol.
person Kristy
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Do you ever have a bad day? Honestly? I have read almost all of your stories and you just continue churning out these practically perfect pieces. Wether it is a one shot, or a lengthy story, they are amazing down to the grammer and punctuation... Sigh, I envy you and your talent, and although I may never write them, I will continue to enjoy them. This story in particular. You are much to modest, it was wonderful! I love this pairing, and I love your interpretation of the couple, particularly Hermione this time.
I have notice in others that you always make her seem less then attractive, but interesting? (I'm curious as to what that means anyways?) In this story I feel her beauty is given due credit, granted she is a fictional character and other then the movie I suppose everyone has their own opinion of how she looks. I guess I've just always assumed she'd have a natural beauty about her, and I finally got that from this story that I didn't in the others... does that even make a lick of sense?
I suppose I'm babbling now and I apoligize. I simply wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your story, and look forward to more. Hmmm... that wasn't so hard, I don't see why I couldn't of just said that instead!

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