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for The Third Mate

by knj4k4

person llyoung
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like option 2. Thanks for writing.
person HPFAN88
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think option two would be better.
person artemyl
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I vote for the child dies. Also, great story so far; hope to see an update soon~!
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Luv the story! I vote for option 2. I am a very big fan of harry being the bottom, in this case, the VERY bottom. Of course this is your story and you should write about whatever you want! anyway, great story!
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am not sure, but can you do a combo of the two and have all the steamy sex scenes.
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
At least they somewhat settle their differences. Awesome story
person Juana13
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, this was so hot, and so sweet too! i loved it! poor sirius thinking he was the bitch in the pack! he's not! and i find it funny that harry would dominate him. i mean, yeah he fits being the one who would be pregnate... but i guess its still nice. anyway, i love it. : ) if you do decide to continue this, i'll be waiting!! looking forward to it!
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome i hope you do add more .. later for now
angel
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY chapter 2!!! idk if i reviewed for chapter 1 already, but it was a great chapter!! and so was this one!! i love the conflicting feelings they all feel and their confusions & love for each other.
Great story
-Kyle
person Caldonya
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty hot stuff. Great story well thought out

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