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Nicely done. I noticed Harry seems to be slightly Bi-curious, well whatever. It's not like you're having him suddenly fall in love with Voldemort and Snape. I wonder if Harry will realize the true usefullness of parseltongue? After all, in order to actually his like a snake, one has to make their tongue vibrate at a certain frequency and I'm sure there's many a witch who'd appreciate such effects.

I love the story so far. It is by far one of the best written stories grammatically on the site that I have read. I also thoroughly enjoy the story and can't wait until you post more to see where it goes.

Hahahaha that last chapter was awesome! More please!

By the way, I really like how this story isn't just smut. You have also given it some depth and a plot is always good ^.^ Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what will happen now and who he will eventually end up with..Although I'm leaning towards Katie here >.<

I loved this chapter!!! Especially Ron's convo with Draco LOL

*lol* Really, Draco? You deny you're a poufter, but not that your father bribed his way out of Azkaban? :P

Good story so far, keep it up! :)

This is great, a story with a plot that actuallky keeps me interested enough to read all of it. Also you seem to write fast, which is always a bonus. Hope to see more soon.

Awesome story.
Very realistic compared to most of the other stories like this.
I also love how you have him taking care of his reputation in a way that actually makes sense.

Aww, and it started so well.

I'm not nearly as interested in Harry's PR campaign as a subplot. Be careful that you don't try and fix everything that's wrong in Harry's life. And just where did the idea of polygamy come from? Harry's a 14-year old boy sexually (and magically) experimenting with some flirtatious witches on his Quidditch team. When did it get serious? I can't believe that a young man in his position would be having these thoughts on a committed relationship with multiple partners already when he hasn't even had his first girlfriend. Fooling around and having fun, sure. I hope this won't become a Harry-Has-3-Girlfriends story. I have an easier time buying him being inquisitive and eager enough to work his way through a significant amount of the female population of Hogwarts while improving his "services", than becoming romantically involved with a group of them.

I loved that you gave Harry some bi-curiosity, but cleared up his sexuality without being discriminative. I particularly like your analogy of the candle and the sun.

Get back to the smut!

Oh, and why the change in the outcome of the Second Task? When did Katie become the thing he'd "sorely miss"? When did Dumbledore ever believe the Daily Prophet?