rate_review Reviews

Harsh!! This needs continuing.....could be a very good, angsty story. I can't believe Severus would stupidly hold onto Lily when he was a willing wife who obviously has feelings for him.....

Ouch. That was painful and very sad.... Well written though.

please, please, please! Write more.

please update some more it was a great start.. really sad and cold but i love it. please update soon.. PLEASE''''''

I wish this was more than a one shot. I just hate the idea that Severus is still so enamoured with Lily, when in my opinion, she was only a fair weather friend to him, and all in all didn't treat him very well. I honestly think this could be explored more. I'm by no means saying it wasn't good, because it was. I don't know sometimes I'm a little far fetched with my hopes that Severus could find the love that he desires and have it be a love that is worthy of him. It was hard to read something so sad though! But great job, none the less!

damn that was just wrong

I really wish this wasn't a oneshot, it has the possibility to be so much more. I would think a little on maybe continuing this a bit . Well done!!!

I agree... this has potential to be a great full story.. please consider expanding it