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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was certainly different from what I had expected, but in a good way. I like the way you describe Lucius' complete submission, as well as Snape's delight in learning that Lucius waited for his touch alone in order to seek such relief. I find myself curious as to the background relationship that developed into this interlude. Should you ever choose to go beyond this, you certainly have an auspicious beginning to what could be an epic tale.
Thank you for sharing, and happy writing!
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April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well ... I dunno, I don't think I liked it so much. I like the beginning, really good. But I think you rushed it at the end, and you kind of lost the track of what was happening at the very end. Maybe not my favorite, but it's at least not even close on my "Garbage" list, would need some work, I do like the use of words in some areas!
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 : DAMN! That was excellent! Snicker