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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Has potential, but the story line is choppy and hard to follow.
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting beginning. I am looking forward to more soon. Thanks!
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. I just think that the chapters should be a bit longer. I look forward to reading more.