rate_review Reviews

oohh i liked it very much....update please?

Wonder if he shows up?

I like your writing style and the fact that you don't use their names kind of makes them turn into completely different persons during their encounter. I like that. Good first try at writing slash, as well. :)
I couldn't help feeling reminded of Anne Rice's Lestat and Nicky ... *goes into a dreamy state*
Anyways. I really like your story. Keep it coming. And don't worry about your English ... at least that's my opinion (also a non-native speaker, but still ... ^^) *Thumbs up*

this is a good start :-) hope you plan to write more stories