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for Breaking the Chain

by RynStar15

person Anon
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a double helping. Totally delish! And such an emotional gauntlet too. The sex scenes were divine and I feel the need to recite my mantra. "I must not be jealous of a fictional character! I must not be jeaous of a fictional character". Sigh - it's not working here either. LMAO Their intamacy, especially the heated physical rush at the end of the last chapter were perfect. As for Alvida - yaya me for thinking she never died that night but I must say, I did not expect her to be the 'new' owner in France. Loved that twist. Well done! Now I guess we wait and see what happens whey they get back to their own time (if that is indeed where they end up). Oh and I loved how Hermione told Draco about the time they used Polyjuice - I love it when parts of the official books blend their way into fan fics so much that you're not sure which is which. :)
person apolla92
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn this fic is so good! i need more, post more asap!
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story ! I'm really excited to see what else happens ^_^

update soon
person javolk
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is awesome! About how long do you think it will be? Because at this point I wish it could go on forever!
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let this have a happy ending in which Draco finally pulls his head out of his arse and they end up together. lol Goodness I just can't get enough of this story.
person javolk
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! Two chapters in one day! I can't wait to find out what happens! Good thing its the weekend!!! ;D
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As if we're not having enough fun and action - we now get mystery...oooo!
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I can't wait to see where it goes next.

Keep up the good work
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
eeek great chapter really excited about reading the next one!!! ^_^
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yet another fantastic update. I adore Alvida, and I can't wait for more!!

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