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for Breaking the Chain

by RynStar15

schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo glad you're working on this again, i'm pretty excited about it.
I want a nice happy ending.
TBH i absolutely couldn't stand the ending where she married Fred, i want Draco and Hermione to have a happy ending and possibly have many babies together =O
person mlui
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, so does that mean you're going to continue this? Or is there going to be a sequel? I cried a bit again... =D
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last ending, it was sad but so poetically beautiful.. And now you've gone and ended it on a cliffy, darn you? Now I'm going to wonder if she found Draco and they got their happily ever after. There's another chapter to come, right????? :)
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn!


that was some HOT smut;)
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please tell me there's a sequel, I may pass out.

BEAUTIFUL.
person kazfeist
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was a surprise! I was always hoping for a happy ending...can't wait to see you pull it off. :D
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My darling,I think is a brilliant idea but please put the alternative endings as well so we can vote
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
After all this emiotional reading and a box of tissues I really hope you give us a happy ending as I'm not sure how much more crying I can take. Please update this.
person mlui
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really cried! It was so sad, yet so lovely and beautiful! I adore time travel fics! (Maybe you can put time travel in the summary? I'm always searching for time travel fics.) I was sad that Draco thought she might be pregnant, but isn't there a spell they could've done? The first ending was really sad, but moving. The second, I didn't think it worked. The third, I like since they're together! The plot was very intriguing and fabulous! I just fell in love with it right away.
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i was so angry at the original ending...i felt like i had wasting time reading the story...i loved the alternate ending so much more...that should have been the real ending!!!! loved the story!!!!!(im considering the alternate ending the only ending)

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