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You're story, pace, length and detail are great. I wouldn't suggest you change about them. :-) If you're looking for something to improve on, and it's not all that bad, so please don't take it to be, there are times when you switch current and past tense. As a writer I know how difficult it can be to keep up one tense, so I am honestly not criticizing you, just giving you something to work on if you want. :-) I really do enjoy this story, so I hope you update again really soon. Thanks! HG4eva

LOL loved the ending great chapter please update soon !! =]

Well I'm glad you got all "inspired" and wrote something to get things heated up! I, although not a writer, quite enjoy reading the raunchy scenes (or I wouldn't be here, I suppose) and I too can't wait for them to be going at it.
God, I just wish Draco was a REAL person. That would be awesome. And HOTT!

MORE!!! I love it :D I hear you though! When I get horny I write it out! :)

loved it
hope u update soon
we all want to raunchy stuff soon too
:)

gotta question; is he substituting intimacy to keep his mind off his issues?? The sex scene was hot, and I like how he has Hermione guessing. Hell, I'm guessing!! Good chapter!

Actually, I felt this was the right build...Draco is a sexual, volatile beast and when he erupts it would be either in rage or sexually. It was bound to happen. To bad she didn't reciprocate, poor baby is probably throbbing.

I think he needs a friend though, outside of Hermione, so hopefully Blaise will be one. I think Blaise's hurt look was very telling and hope Draco reaches out. Also, damn it, get those scars looked at, you can't let them get infected! ARGH!

So, they are a couple, yay. I hope Draco and Blaise get over to the Order. Draco needs to think for himself, now!

Liked the tonsil hockey, and the hidey-hole. She did heal the cuts, didn't she? :D

Well, my question from the previous chapter was answered. I think she ought to teach him to heal them, along with other 'healing' techniques. :D Lovely chapter, and the hawt sexxxx wasn't bad, either. :D

This story has the BEST summery I have ever read! I laughed my ASS OFF. hehehehehe