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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much! We definitely need updates...
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so thrilled with this update! You didn't go where I thought you were going, you tease. He didn't think, "Oh I forgot to ask her my questions" and go back and find her on the floor. OMG! And now, what a cliffie. More, dear. Your readers are waiting!
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Anticipation never hurt anyone. Excellent chapter, my dear!
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello there!
I just wanted to let you know that I also was hooked with your story and can't wait to find out what happens next ;)
I liked the idea of Snape helping her (and not the other way round) and that she isn't helpless and friends-abandonned (I don't know if the word exists,but hope you know what I mean) Your style is nice and the story flows fluently which makes the reader want to read more and more... which is not very smart, especially when one should write her degree work...ehh,life
Anyway, please keep going:)
Wishing you all the best,
Belle
I just wanted to let you know that I also was hooked with your story and can't wait to find out what happens next ;)
I liked the idea of Snape helping her (and not the other way round) and that she isn't helpless and friends-abandonned (I don't know if the word exists,but hope you know what I mean) Your style is nice and the story flows fluently which makes the reader want to read more and more... which is not very smart, especially when one should write her degree work...ehh,life
Anyway, please keep going:)
Wishing you all the best,
Belle
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Outstanding job! Please update again once more.
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so glad to read the newest chapter. It felt as though it was a quite long wait! lol, but I'm a tad over eager when waiting for your updates. ^-^
This really was an enchanting chapter, but still, shame on you. Leaving us all to wonder what will happen when Hermione and Severus "bump" into one another at the function. I doubt either one will just sit idly by once Hermione also realizes that both of them are in attendance. Spaarks will fly I hope.
I can't wait until your next chapter!
This really was an enchanting chapter, but still, shame on you. Leaving us all to wonder what will happen when Hermione and Severus "bump" into one another at the function. I doubt either one will just sit idly by once Hermione also realizes that both of them are in attendance. Spaarks will fly I hope.
I can't wait until your next chapter!
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading your first five chapters, this is a great story. The only thing I find a little odd is Hermione's blas
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cant say as I blame HG for getting drunk. I think that is what I would do if our positions were reversed. I am NOT impressed with the boyfriend. Not even a little
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"He could offer his services on multiple levels, he thought devilishly, and each could take of the other what they wanted in return. " Well I certainly hope he gets too! How long till she drops the vacation facade? have I mentioned how much I am adoring this story? Mucho.
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm such a bad reviewer. I just couldn't stop reading long enough to post after each chapter so I race through 2-5 and now hopefully I'll leave a nice enough review to make up for it. So...This has been F A N T A S T I C! Really, holy cow. I love, love, love Snape and how he's living his life after the war. He's so sure of himself, and that as we all know just makes for a sexy man. It helps that his voice is postively heavenly. You describe it so well. Spot on. Hermione's reactions made so much sense to me. First with Evan and how she broke down and then got back at him. Then how she is attempting to keep her illness a secret from everyone (though I think it's stupid, I know she's been hurt and now she's protecting herself). I love how she propositioned Snape. Hilarious! And I understand her reaction there to. BTW, I think Snape messing with her first thing in the morning was genius. It's a common trope, but you made it all your own and Snape was so sauve and sexy. Yum! Well, this has just gone on long enough. But, before I end, if you want to answer reviews individually, you may want to post to Ashwinder, or the TPP, or OWL. I think they all allow that. And you'd expand your readership!
Cant' wait for more!
Cant' wait for more!