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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Consider this to be more positive reinforcement.
I'm glad for Hermione, though I know she isn't at the moment. Even for the short amount of time she has left, she's well rid of him. But does she really have as short a time as she thinks? *smirk*
I'm glad for Hermione, though I know she isn't at the moment. Even for the short amount of time she has left, she's well rid of him. But does she really have as short a time as she thinks? *smirk*
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent beginning. I'm hooked.
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. GODS. I am...I'm just so....I have no words. Seriously. I'm so friggin' PISSED at Evan and Pansy. That SKANK. That BASTARD. Seriously, honey, get back here. I can't wait for more. Way to snare my attention hook, line, and sinker!
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot. Evan is such a prick, its great! and i love womanising Severus too. *swoon*
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely sense of 'duty' the erstwhile fiance` can claim. Fried testicles on toast, anyone? They're small, so take two. Dare I hope something more palatable is available for the next course? Good chapter, got me a bit riled up as you can read.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not a wasted effort. I'd like to read more.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The first few paragraphs feel kind of shaky, but overall it's a good chapter and definitely makes me want to read more. Good job, keep going!
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good beginning.
Can't wait to read more.
if this is a SS/HG, shouldn't you put it in that section?
Can't wait to read more.
if this is a SS/HG, shouldn't you put it in that section?
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
need to finish. more please
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ack! what is it?? i must know!! more more!!.....although honestly how did our dear hermione get stuck with such a tool?