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for Hopes and Wishes

by 4872luk

person knj4k4
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wonderful just great!!
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I's so glad that the Teddy managed to make its way with them all to Hogwarts. ^^
I was actually afraid they'd leave it behind. o_o


Keep up the good work!
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great so far. I like the teddy bear aspect you could have Harry talk to teddy and as much to the grownups.
person Selera
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What they most hold dear is their normalcy and that is very hard to take away, but meh.. I'd almost be tempted to leave them where they are now.

I love your story and look forward to more.
person qwerty
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was such a heart-wrenching statement that Harry made. So matter-of-fact too.
Dumbledore is so manipulative but at least it resulted in Harry getting away from the Dursleys.
Great story so far. I really like this. Keep going!
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I hope you keep going Harry is going to be very interesting with those two raising him.
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dear friend had to go mow my jynormus lawn, came and had the treat of reading A really good chapter keep up the good work I also like the speech patterns of Harry.
person Selera
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes and Normalcy is very hard to disrupt.. though.. then again the fear of their normalcy being destroyed could be just deserts. Not easily done but possible.

Anyways I think this chapter was insanely cute. I look forward to the next.
person Hello
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it! :)
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter wish we could help Sev and Remus kick but I also again like how Harry talks it make since because he would not allowed to speak much. keep up with Teddy and keep up with the good work .

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