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by ricerabbit

schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm a bit obsessed with this story. great characterizations, interesting plot, and absolutely wonderful writing. i can't wait to see what happens at the ministry ball :)
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cormac... Ew. Nice that he's grown up and all, but still!
I was reading a few other reviews, and it's funny how most people are mad at Draco, and I'm not, particularly-- because Hermione was acting stupid, very stupid, and Draco's a proud man-- he'd never admit to heartbreak... and he's not THAT old that he'd forget how to be an asshole at the drop of a hat.
Umm, I'd be interested in reading from Draco's perspective... as long as it's not all the same scenes as with Hermione.
person katiekrm
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I feel so powerful that I changed a story, especially one I have been enjoying so much. I must remember that with great power comes great responsibility. Now let's get a ministry orgy going, stat! I've never read one before. You could be the first to write it. ;-) I like the rewrite. Hermione was stronger and Draco has some serious apologizing to do to get her back. Calling her a mudblood and a slag is pretty awful. I do understand that he was hurt that she called him nothing, as he has a right to be, but that is still no excuse. I really hope she makes him work for it! Great chapters!
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are soooo nice!! I love where the story is taking us now! A little competition wont hurt! It's unbelievable that no one else would want Hermione! Now Draco has to eat every horrible thing he said to her! If only Hermione could be a little more daring and outgoing im sure she would be swarmed with suitors!
person Snakekat
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, great pacing and not at all predictable, well done. I hope Draco is at the Gala.
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT...yay...a date. I'm still reeling from the horrible things Draco said to her. Especially about how she was a slag and about her scar. I'm so upset about that - STILL!

Cormac -- what an great and interesting choice. I like that he's changed and he's still handsome.

Hmm, Draco's POV - maybe. It would be interesting.

Um, hey, wait does she get her man at the end of this story? LOL
person Fallen Star
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! Sorry I haven't reviewed since I started reading but I love it!!! Wait til Draco finds out about this!! I smell DRAMA!!!
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That fight scene was one of the funniest things I've read since Diamond in the Rough's Lucius/Hermione chase scene through the halls of Malfoy Manor. I was guffawing - GUFFAWING! And I can totally see an utterly clueless Pansy self-involved with her ring (though why Draco would bring her is beyond me) and a gorgeous Granger looking horrified.

WOW - I had hopes for Cormac but oh well...once a git...

That ending threw me...what the hell happened? Don't leave me this way . . .
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank you for updating chapter 12, I got to enjoy eating my lunch while reading. That is a good day. I hope to see another one in a few hours, if you haven't already hint hint.

I love this chapter, cormic still couldn't change.

I love the end of the chapter with her and draco. I am just going to wait to see what happens, but I can surely guess.
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gah! So, that was kind of marvelous! "Queen of what?" was wonderful!
I wonder why she fainted... and aww with Draco and stuff. Anyway, I feel kind of awkward that I'm constantly reviewing-- but what can I say? I like it!

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