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by ajgordon

schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved!
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
did you mean this chapter or the next?
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow but Sev doesn't love Harry? If Harry ever found out or thought he wasn't loved by Sev, one he gave complete contral over to, he would be crushed!
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I forgot will Sev ever do something to Harry, hurt him, that he will regret. In heat of the moment, when he is very angry and/or hurt scared when he relieses his true feelings.
person knj4k4
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i guess i dont understand why purring is bad? is it because Harry wasn't supposed to show his other side? because i didn't think Severus knew about that. anyway..I enjoy your dom sub relationship, yes i know sometimes i get squeamish but when i reread it in the right mood its great, but Dom's are supposed to give too, its a give and take, dom's give protection and security and growthi, and subs give their body, heart, and obedience. i haven't seen Severus giving much, or do i have that wrong?
person sable_silverrain
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, hotness! Are YOU into BDSM?? I've been aware that I'm a sub for about a year now, and if you're into that kind of thing, you should join Fetlife and friend me! My name on there is Sablesilverrain. Interested? Oh, and also, could you add in some Luc, maybe?? *hope* He's sooo hot, and there's not as much out there with him in it as I'd like to see.
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor harry should have told him sooner before Sev discovered it for himself. He will need to punish Harry greatly for this infraction. Maybe even tie him up and not let him sleep in the bed and absolutely Harry will not be allowed to have any release for at least 24 or 48 hours while being stimulated and servicing Severus many times. You will have to decide if Harry tells him about Sirius and Remus being there first. I think this will have to be a whole new punishment or at least extend it another 24 hours. Perhaps he should have to share Harry's punishment with another older gentleman. Lucius may at least love to watch, but then he will be busy with the Dark Lord. Nice Chapter, when I saw it up I said "YES!!!"

Thanks for writing and I hope you are able to continue this soon.
person julieqt2
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
enjoying this a lot. Thankyou
person Hambares
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Updates!!!
person sable_silverrain
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, now THAT was hot! I think you melted my computer! Loved it!

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