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August 16, 2022 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! Hope you update someday :D
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March 12, 2022 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I can't wait for the next update!!!
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March 12, 2022 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I can't wait for the next update!!!
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August 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update!
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January 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So cruel to leave it like this! Please update i wanna know...no need to know what happens!
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April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that this story has more to it! i would love to see what happens
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June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well it felt like forever since I had seen an update for this so I figured I would just check to make sure I hadn't missed an update. and since I was already here I figured why not reread it? Big mistake XP I want an update even MORE! I hope this wonderful story has not been forgotten.
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March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've just been reading this story. First of all, I'd like to say that I really like it. I like your portrayal of Logan and Remy and even Harry (althought, Angel might be closer given the vast differences we see between a canonical Harry Potter and the broken and almost-crushed state of Harry in your story). I like you follow through on the abuse, the hesitancy in his interactions and the manipulation of him by others.
There's really only one item that I think needs to be mentioned in terms of constructive criticism. You should spellcheck your story or engage a beta reader to catch the little niggly mistakes in spelling and in some cases character names. It can be tough to hear criticism, but this is coming from a place of well meaning affection. I love your story ideas, I like how you get them down on paper (so to speak) and I like your resolutions. I'll be watching Freak Like Me closely for any updates.
Thank you for writing it and choosing to share it.
There's really only one item that I think needs to be mentioned in terms of constructive criticism. You should spellcheck your story or engage a beta reader to catch the little niggly mistakes in spelling and in some cases character names. It can be tough to hear criticism, but this is coming from a place of well meaning affection. I love your story ideas, I like how you get them down on paper (so to speak) and I like your resolutions. I'll be watching Freak Like Me closely for any updates.
Thank you for writing it and choosing to share it.
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March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
more please
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February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
im REALLY into this story!
personally i would have used my power on sabertooth taking into account the fact that remy and logan didnt want anybody els to touch him ut he was maybe too scared then
i REALLY want to see harry put some beat down on dumbledoor soon!
i mean i like him generally but when he's all manipulative i just want to punch him! like as quickly as possible! ^^
-noirekitsune@yahoo.com
personally i would have used my power on sabertooth taking into account the fact that remy and logan didnt want anybody els to touch him ut he was maybe too scared then
i REALLY want to see harry put some beat down on dumbledoor soon!
i mean i like him generally but when he's all manipulative i just want to punch him! like as quickly as possible! ^^
-noirekitsune@yahoo.com