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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank you darling...appreciate the spacing. funny little chapter...him smelling her has thrown me for a loop. I'm wondering if it means anything....hmmm.
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Maybe Hermione will be getting some advice from Ginny in the future? Draco has to do something soon...twice in one day is too much of a coincidence for him not to realise. I wonder how they might come together...
Look forward to the next chapter!
Look forward to the next chapter!
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how canon Draco is...going to keep an eye out to see where it's going.
PS: one tiny request? can you space out your paragraphs for easier reading? txs a million! :-)
PS: one tiny request? can you space out your paragraphs for easier reading? txs a million! :-)
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. The way you have them meeting sets a good platform for what is to come. I also like the way you have written Pansy. Personally I find her character really annoying to write! Look forward to the next chapter!
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have a nice writing style that's nice to read. It'd be good to see where you take this, although I hope not all of your chapters are that short!
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic so far. As you said it is a little short and there are some grammer error here and there. But My first chapter wasn't that great either. I love Draco/Hermione fic so can't wait to see where this goes. Good luck and can't wait to see more.
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome!