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for False Pretense

by ricerabbit

person katiekrm
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's just downright cruel to leave it there. I think this is my favorite one of yours so far.
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SWEET and I loved the reveal at the Quidditch match....Draco fighting with Sev was hilarious.

Loved how he proposed.
person katiekrm
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I saw that you had updated earlier and didn't realize that there was even more! Yeah! That was fabulous!
person Robs
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY, I got my happy ending! I kinda thought Draco would find out about the baby by himself. It seems Hermione was never going to say anything...

Loved the ending, it was perfect! I look forward to seeing more of your writing!
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! you amaze me with how quickly you post these! this was a great one would have been nice to see a bit more of a catfight between her and gabrielle. but i love this and love everyone of your stories keept it up :)
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! They're getting married!! Cute story!!
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know you're addicted to a story when you check pretty much 20 times a day to see if it's been updated. I couldn't tell you how happy I was when I saw that it was updated twice! =] I cannot wait to see how Draco finds out!! Keep up the amazing work!!
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"She could put off grading a few papers; which she had already graded" - funny line.

Okay, she's an idiot. Can I say? Okay, I just did. She really really hurt him. I mean deeply. What does she think? That someone who cares for you that deeply and goes out on a limb like that is going to keep coming back for more abuse? ARGH!
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"but secretly felt terrible" - yah think Hermione?

Well, I betcha Draco comes back with a girl on his arm from Spain. How is she planning on hiding this from him? Oh, the ridiculous messes she's gets herself into. All she had to do was take a chance...he was willing.
person kazfeist
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hah! What a great development! Can't wait for what happens next! :D

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