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YOUR KILLIN ME WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS. lol I really like this story. Keep up the great work and UPDATE SOON!

I enjoyed reading this chapter. I was afraid you might let le story end very soon without further complications, the three of them getting into bed and Colben ending up minister of magic :-)). But now I'm convinced you will give it it's time, and I'm glad.
Should have known it, really. Very good. I think now that the bond is open Harry will probably lose his fear that Severus and Draco would hurt him when they bevcome lovers, and it will also confirm his knowledge that no one but them can give him what he really wants in a relationship.

Hey, better late than never. Anyway, loved it, as usual. Forgot that they hadn't really looked into Colben's background. Especially with Swanfair not the most trustworthy of people. Gotta wonder if on of them is somehow behind the Ministry and urging them on. Can't what for Friday.

I just have to know: are you a student of practical politics? Because your grasp of it is absolutely marvelous. You have the rasp of levels within levels and intersecting but separate plans and goals that I only wish I could have, as well as being able to incorporate them into a fictional setting and give them a sense of immediacy my own writing lacks. (bowing repeatedly)I'm not worthy!

Awesome chapter! I'm so glad that Harry finally opened the bonds. I liked the reasons you gave for Harry's hesitation since they were very believable in the context of Harry's personality. Even though the bond is open, their relationship has much room to grow since they still don't /fully/ understand one another.
Keep going!

Gorgeous doesn't cover it, doesn't do it justice. I need bigger words, something more inticate and elegant to describe: best happy, warm, powerful, captivating, prickly tear feeling, heart jumping out of my throat, forgetting how to breathe, vibrating in my seat while I read this package of delicate strength and beauty. Sorry. I'm not the author. I don't have to be coherent. You, however, excell at it. Thank you. You are swaying my reading preferences.

~Mia

WOW! This chapter was AMAZING! The best yet, in my opinion. The imagery during the Earthquake Tunnel scene was absolutely intoxicating. I could really see the great Phoenix, the bond shimmering all around them, and especially the tilting, shaking house. It was so clear in my head--I'm just dying to sit down and sketch out their crumbling home.

I'm also as awed by my own forgetfulness as I am by the perfection of this chapter. How could I forget that there was still one more step to go in forming the bond?! I completely overlooked the fact that Harry still hadn't opened his side of the bond, becoming swept away in Draco's and Severus's happiness with hearing Harry and each other. But what a glorious way to be reminded! I simply can't wait to hear more about the fullness each must be feeling now with the bond entirely open. And I loved Harry's initial fears being broken down both by his bondmates' reassurances and his own hunger for what he feels when the bonds are open.

Like I said, the best chapter yet. And I'm really looking forward to the next :)

Thanks for the update. I am going to visit my sister out of state for a few weeks, so hopefully there will be lots of updates when I get back! I am glad Harry got over some of his fears and that BOTH Draco and Serverus are gaining ground with Harry. Again, thanks for the update!

Amazing story! I am absolutely in love with it. Your writing is beautiful and I seriously cannot get enough of it. I'm glad I found it so late because I don't think I could've stood the suspense of not knowing whether or not the triad would ever be complete (in love that is). I can't wait for the next update! =)

Just finished reading this for the first time and I am really impressed. Usually triad fics don't have enough detail for me and all the characters kind of bleed together and don't have individual personalities. This fic is one of the exceptions. Very well done. Well detailed but not overly so and there is a storyline other than the relationship wich makes it so much easier to read. I can hardly wait for any update you might have!