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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You deserve lots of cookies. That chapter was gripping. I liked how you had Severus weighing the pro's and con's of showing Harry his jealousy. I think it's very unique that you have Snape's and Draco's emotion as colors and Harry's as pictures. I'm very curious to know what they got Harry for Christmas. I could seriously go scene by scene and tell you everything I loved about this chapter but it's late and I should go to bed. Until next time.
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
P.S.
You take your sweet time getting to the smut. Your story would be good without it, it's just the icing on the cake. I wish people would quit asking authors when they are getting to the smut. I think it's rude!
You take your sweet time getting to the smut. Your story would be good without it, it's just the icing on the cake. I wish people would quit asking authors when they are getting to the smut. I think it's rude!
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i believe that i have read almost all your stories. I find them interesting and very well thought out. but ...this one by far has to be my favorite. A denial!harry. I have read some stories but this one is a bit more believable andd especially how he comes to terms with it. *nodding* please could you send me an email when you update. I really would like to be notify so i won't have to search ever day to see if you have updated. Cheers!!
unbelievable.nyj@gmail.com
unbelievable.nyj@gmail.com
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww!!!!!! I hope Harry gets better and can we find some way to get Ginny and hang her by her ankles in Mr.Filch's office.
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update! It was interesting to see Ginny's interaction with Draco and Snape. I think Harry should just give up...Hermione knows, Drco and Snape know, and now Ginny? When will he finally understand?!
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The moment when Snape - Seveurs called Harry by name was nothing short of glorious. I'm loving it. I'm LOVING it.
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 7: my goodness. I'm aching for Harry so much here. He's really having a tough time, navigating between Draco, Snape and Ginny... but he's so strong, and so Harry. Beautiful chapter as always.
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the gifts chosen for each... I wonder if there's something more to Ginny's distance... hope Harry's ok and that they come up with a way to protect each other from future attacks; thanks for the update!
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Review for the story so far:
A quite fascinating constellation between the characters, lots of existing and possible conflicts.
I like the way you write, during the last weeks I've been reading most of your stories, even your One-Shots, though I don't really like the genre. But I think this story is espicially promising and I long for more...
I certeinly can't critizise Harry's attempt to keep his independence. Don't forget: the two people he's bonded to are his worst remaining enemies and have been for the past seven years. He doesn't know enough about the two of them to trust them, so I can completely understand his reluctance to become close to them. Really, everything else would be stupid for him, at least during the first months and maybe even years after the bonding, regarding the way both of them treated him when he was at school.
Of the three men, every one has to find a unique position inside this bond, has to become somehow necessary for the others to establish true friendship and love.
If Severus and Harry can ever sort the issues between them out, Severus may become something very essential for Harry, can maybe ground him, as a mentor, an older friend with lots of experiences and wisdom, actually, and insights in the nature of life, that neither Dumbledore nor Sirius ever were. But Severus has to accept Harry as an equal, has to accept his feelings and not only tolerate, but understand them in full, and to show and trust his own feelings as well, something he hasn't done for years.
Chapter 6:
It seems as if the three bondmates get along a little better, based on some kind of companionship between Draco and Harry. I find it most likely that Draco can build a bridge between Severus and Harry, but probably only up to a special point. Of course the relationship between S. and H. has to be grounded on something more solid.
What Hermione said about bringing the two pieces of his life together: it's probably a little early for that, as Harry is just starting to accept the facts and consequences of the bond. Severus and Draco have to gain his trust before he is going to make a connection between them and the Weasleys, for example.
I find it quite interesting that Hermione is already starting to give hints regarding a possible sexual relationship. I would like you to give some information from Harry's point of view: what does he think about homsexuality generally? If he is embarassed about Draco and Severus showing their affection in the open, is it because Severus is involved (as the former teacher, much older than Draco) or because the issue of sex between men? What does he think of the fact that his bondmates can feel his emotions during sex? Is he really aware of that fact and what it means (their physical reaction). Is Ginny aware of that, too? And I wonder if he couldn't at least during those moments close the bond without endangering his bondmates. Surely some minutes - or maybe hours - wouldn't kill them?
I'm really looking forward to reading the next parts.
Alli (sorry if my review is unclear in some parts, English is still a foreing language for me)
A quite fascinating constellation between the characters, lots of existing and possible conflicts.
I like the way you write, during the last weeks I've been reading most of your stories, even your One-Shots, though I don't really like the genre. But I think this story is espicially promising and I long for more...
I certeinly can't critizise Harry's attempt to keep his independence. Don't forget: the two people he's bonded to are his worst remaining enemies and have been for the past seven years. He doesn't know enough about the two of them to trust them, so I can completely understand his reluctance to become close to them. Really, everything else would be stupid for him, at least during the first months and maybe even years after the bonding, regarding the way both of them treated him when he was at school.
Of the three men, every one has to find a unique position inside this bond, has to become somehow necessary for the others to establish true friendship and love.
If Severus and Harry can ever sort the issues between them out, Severus may become something very essential for Harry, can maybe ground him, as a mentor, an older friend with lots of experiences and wisdom, actually, and insights in the nature of life, that neither Dumbledore nor Sirius ever were. But Severus has to accept Harry as an equal, has to accept his feelings and not only tolerate, but understand them in full, and to show and trust his own feelings as well, something he hasn't done for years.
Chapter 6:
It seems as if the three bondmates get along a little better, based on some kind of companionship between Draco and Harry. I find it most likely that Draco can build a bridge between Severus and Harry, but probably only up to a special point. Of course the relationship between S. and H. has to be grounded on something more solid.
What Hermione said about bringing the two pieces of his life together: it's probably a little early for that, as Harry is just starting to accept the facts and consequences of the bond. Severus and Draco have to gain his trust before he is going to make a connection between them and the Weasleys, for example.
I find it quite interesting that Hermione is already starting to give hints regarding a possible sexual relationship. I would like you to give some information from Harry's point of view: what does he think about homsexuality generally? If he is embarassed about Draco and Severus showing their affection in the open, is it because Severus is involved (as the former teacher, much older than Draco) or because the issue of sex between men? What does he think of the fact that his bondmates can feel his emotions during sex? Is he really aware of that fact and what it means (their physical reaction). Is Ginny aware of that, too? And I wonder if he couldn't at least during those moments close the bond without endangering his bondmates. Surely some minutes - or maybe hours - wouldn't kill them?
I'm really looking forward to reading the next parts.
Alli (sorry if my review is unclear in some parts, English is still a foreing language for me)