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for Their Phoenix

by Lomonaaeren

person EarlyDawn
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD!! Amazing. Absolutely oved it! It was the perfect whipped cream on top of the perfect ice cream sundae!
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!
That was beautiful. I really enjoyed this story, as you will know by now, and I think I will read it again soon. I was with it from the beginning and waited eagerly for each qand every chapter.
The three of them will be all right. That's so good to know! And the scene with Harry and Severus was hot, and heart-wrenching intimate.
You told me you don't do epilogues or sequels where you show them all with their happy little families and so on, but I'd really like a look at them in about twenty years... but on the other hand, your end is nearly perfect, and though there are questions unanswered, I think I can live with it. Thank you again, and I'll certainly be with you when you write other stories.



person Tiffani
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story was amazing
I loved it so much ^_^
person Mia
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was beautiful. Perfect and felt good and all kinds of glorious harmonium. Thank you for sharing around the beautiful from your head. I have enjoyed and not felt uncomfortable or squicked by a single thing. I love this story. Hard. Unrelentingly. Thank you.

~Mia
person qwerty
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! Great Job!
person NectoMortis
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story from the start and felt like I needed to say Thankyou. So thanks for writing an awesome fic.
Keep writing and never leave a story unfinished (possibly the worst thing you can do in life).
This being the first review I have ever written I hope it matters.
Thanks
NectoMortis
person VoraciousReader
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well done, I will miss it.
person nekoyoka
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....Aw...it's over...sigh...at least I have Corybantes to read, and I need to start reading Soldier's Welcome. I can't believe I've read all but three of your stories...and that's a lot considering you have 99 currently posted. Are you gonna go for 100?
person k lave demo
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. bravo. *bows sincerely japanese style* i really enjoyed the ride. i think the best part though is that u never lost focus of the bond they shared and how it grew. i think that was ur whole objective and u executed it very nicely. i'm glad harry was finally able to let go. i'm sure severus was able to show harry he was cherished just fine. i was kind of expecting u to have used the gift draco gave harry in this fic. but i guess it'll stay in my mind as bein used for a date. i knew u were goin to leave the ending open. i expected it from the third chapter. darn u ur evil. lol. well til next time. viva la vida!
p.s. may ur ideas flow and ur writing hand never slow.
person EarlyDawn
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I haven't reviewed the last couple of chapters, been busy. So, anyway. LOVED IT!! Also can't wait for the next chapter. I twas cool tp see the plan go down.

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