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February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I liked the premise - Parvati taking what she wanted after Harry ignored her. I think you could have spruced up the smut, maybe adding more emotion to it, and you already pointed out the weak ending. But it's good; certainly not horrible.
<3 treeson
I liked the premise - Parvati taking what she wanted after Harry ignored her. I think you could have spruced up the smut, maybe adding more emotion to it, and you already pointed out the weak ending. But it's good; certainly not horrible.
<3 treeson