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by RynStar15

person kazfeist
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was away for a while, driving cross-country, and didn't use the Net. I'm back now, and enjoying your story. I usually review when the spirit moves me, though, not when I'm asked to by the author. I'll keep reading til I'm caught up, k? :D
person kazfeist
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hah! Nice cliffie. ;D
person kazfeist
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! A real rollercoaster of a ride. So Hermione got impregnated with Voldemort/Lucius' seed, and since she aborted it, it's non-existent? Or is the baby in an orphanage somewhere? You've really done a unique plot twist, I must say. Kudos! :D
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great action chapter....though the ending wasn't a surprise....Lucius is a devious thing. still not sure of his full role. oh, hermione...live live live
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is my Hermione.... Ok we need out knight and shinning armour... Please remember the tissue alerts...
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man i feel so bad for Draco, he just got Hermonie back. I also feel bad for Harry. Can't wait to see what happenes but please a lil heads up for tears.
You got me in Breaking the Chain. i loved that story and it was to sad at the end.I would read alternate ending of Breaking the Chain. Well keep yp wit the greay work your a great writer.
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ryan: I can't take you breaking my bloody heart again! *wipes tears and nose*
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!! Why did you have to leave it right there? Update soon! Please!
person Robs
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh, the plot is thickening!!! Is Harry posessed or something? I'm sure we'll find out when Hermione has looked at his memory. Draco really cares about Hermione doesn't he? I hope he can find a way to save her. Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you at least you remember TY so much that means a lot.. Girl you are killing me here and there is something else going on that we still do not know ....Baby??????? Ok I only read between the lines a little.. Please help Hermione and save them all. It is just a plea.. ty

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