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oh and I forgot to say - you can't keep this hanging as a one-shot! Too many unanswered questions...!! What Happens Next... ??

Very Hot and Erotic! Excellent job *Fans Face* Certainly has brightended my morning. :)

neelix,

It's quite ok. I thank anyone who offers good and construtive critism. I knew I should have gone searching for a beta, but I had no idea where to look! lol

I know my email shows up as hidden but: to anyone who is free and able to help me I beg you (on hands and knees)to email me with any advise at spiderkiller007@yahoo.com

Thanks again neelix. Honesty is greatly appreciated for any future stories I might do.

This was a fantastic story! I really hope you continue it and don't just keep it as a one-shot. There's so much more I want to know.

The ending so warming. They both wanted the other, but didn't think the other reciprocated. I fully support a few more chapters!

I would like to see you continue with this story. I really liked it.