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Dear lord, I was howling at the lobsters comment. I have a 4yr old and this just reminded me of what comes out of his mouth.

I really felt Hermione's loss of innocence for some reason in this chapter. I don't think she's had a memorable sexual experience. I mean, of course that time with Lucius was memorable but for the wrong reasons...do I make any sense? Not saying she regrets it but its different when you have mutual, sweaty, hot, delicious sex. I also felt her single mother status keenly. It must have been wonderful to dress up and go out, albeit with a 4yr old in tow. These little 'family' moments must be breaking her heart or at least affecting it.

I really liked this chapter. Lucius is clearly interested. Do either realize that he's wooing her?

You've gotta love kids! Elias is so bold and upfront about everything, I can't imagine it will be long until he asks 'the question'. Lucius really is a gentleman, isn't he? I really like the way they're both so unsure around each other too. It's so real and it makes your story a pleasure to read! Off to re-read His Saving Grace now...Look forward to the next chapter!!

Dito! Babe! Six was great but the one I loved the most was Buried! I was freaking rolling with that one! I love have you take these epic characters and make them human!

The tingling feelings that Hermione and Lucius keep feeling whenever they touch--is it their magic acting favorably to them becoming a couple? I'm curious if you will eventually explain this in the story...

Hey Lady!

"It means a lot that you accept my writing style, my

Thank you so much for this chapter!! I was having a pretty BAD day (fighting with one of my friends) So to come home to this, I laughed my head off! I really needed this, thank you! I am now in the process of REreading Remember and I am falling in love with it all over again. You should be VERY proud of this story. I agree with the time turner stories, but yours is one of my FEW (2) favorites. I am very much looking forward to the new Serverus/Hermione fic, dark or not. I feel that a light hearted, happy go lucky Severus just isn't him. I personally think that we all have a bit of darkness in us. Some more than others, but it is there none the less.

Brillant chapter xxx

Elias is such a little boy with his little quirks xxx

Lucius made a fine father of Elias xx

More soon please xx

OMG!! It is official I absolutely love Elias!! I don't think I've laughed so hard in a long time!!! The things that come out of that child's mouth are beyond priceless!!! That makes you a writer extraordinaire, every word you choose is perfectly placed to elicit the right emotions. That's why your stories are among my very favorites!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Elias just keeps getting better and better! I agree that Hermione needs to talk with her "boys"...Elias's ears hear way too much! :-) I wonder if Hermione picked up on what Elias said, though, about how Lucius was looking at her like he wanted to take her to bed... ;-)

Hmm...which will come first: Lucius telling Elias he's his father, or Lucius kissing Hermione? I hope at least one of these comes soon! :-)

Fabulous work. I don't think I have ever laughed so hard!

More Elias and uncomfortable observations and comments please