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schedule
June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really good for a first try. If you don't write any more for this one, you should start a much longer one. Keep them coming.
schedule
May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good for a first attempt. Though you really do need a beta, there were quite a few errors in it. But I did enjoy it. Good job!