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person dark_samira
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gosh I like it...so much fire between them....can't wait for the sex scenses.
Mmmm if it's finished already why to post one chaper per week? It's way too long....come on, at least one every 2-3 days?
Pretty please?
*bribes in the form of little whip-wielding Lucious-like chocolate cookies*
person Coipje
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Me like this story
I hope you continue soon ;)
person rini868
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Yeah right! Lucius with a sagging belly... Pffth!

Awwww! Lucius isn
person Jesse
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was a little unsure of how much I would enjoy this, I must say, after reading the first story. I felt it did not have the spark that I am used to from you. However! I am very much blinded by this spark from chapter 2!! I love the snarky comments between Lucius and Hermione. I can't wait for more and to see where you take this. Neither will back down from their spitting match I'm sure and I can't wait to see the fur fly between these two. My only complaint is that you are taking too long between chapters. You had better chain yourself to your computer and forget about anything else in your life until this is done!! ;)
Until then, I sit here anxiously!
person Rainie
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love that is what I have for this story. I love a good verbal match. Thanks and happy writing.
person Ravenna
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have no qualms in wanting to find what's under Lucius' robes. *winks* After reading this chapter, I feel like you have started us in the middle of the situation. Snape seems to be a major player in this whole marriage plot, but we have yet to see him. I can't wait to see what happens as the story progresses.
person dragon88
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I thought it was funny that Lucius would be jealous about a possible crush on Snape. Hmmm one wonders what Snape's role is going to be in this? Looking forward to reading more, update soon please :P
person aleysiasnape
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Love the ending of it where I think Lucius is a little bit jealous of her having a crush on Severus? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mostly im confused but since im pretty sure thats me and the fact its midnight rather than you im gonna keep reading and hope it all makes sense!! I like the idea and i love stories with Hermione and Lucius sparring at each other, great stuff!
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? I love it.So who's hooked up with Sev?Where's Draco in all this and what does he think of it?
I don't know who I feel more sorry for,Him or her.Can't wait for more.

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