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person Joani
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally back from job training! loved the updates, looking forward to more.....hopefully steamy chapters.
person Gilly_sirl
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, my personal "penchants" would put the handcuffs on the girl, but why not give our darling Lucius a ride? And you're the boss, I don't think you need my opinion to be brilliant!
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 40

person aleysiasnape
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I loved the part where Lucius walks in on Hermione reading: "Seven Steps to Sexually Satisfy Your Slytherin
person blue artemis
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love Narcissa's idea of waxing. Hee. And Lucius is an idiot if he thinks that Draco and Hermione had hooked up at any time. I really enjoyed all the byplay here. This was a fun chapter to read. So, do we find out what #2 is soon?
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww...poor Hermy. She got caught with her little trashy magazine. It's always embarrassing to get caught with smut. *Nods sagely.* Well, nice plot advancement in this chapter. I'm starting to see some ideas come together. And as for waxing, I can't even get past my eyebrows, there's no way I'd be brave enough to do it below the neck. Period.

I like your Narcissa. She's so....I think the word would be a mix between cute and slightly off-kilter. She's almost like a Slytherin Luna, except without the crumple-horned snorkacks and nargles. Yeah, that's it.

Once again, I love Sevvie-kins and Luci-poo. They are so clever, and so smart, and so dang sexy it's just not fair! *Sigh* Ah well. I'm looking forward to more plot advancements, and to more of our favorite Dynamic Duo (that would be Hermione and Lucius in this case. Although, Severus could be Batman (Don't tell him I said that, he'd kill me. 0_o))

~DragonFyre
person rini868
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
He probably would prefer the bums but I was thinking about the scandal that would inevitably result from that...

I thought trophy immediately and was like "What?!?!?... Ohhhh!"

Yes, of course Narcissa gets the job of compiling a list of personal products and Hermione gets to record stuff.

I hope they find out what's going on. I know they will but it doesn't stop me from hoping. I personally think it's a potion of some sort, added into the water supply.
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Riiiiight, Lucius spanking the students? they'll be lined up from the dungeons to the Astronomy tower! Nice chapter, you've set up several intriguing possibilities.
person jw
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ch 40 - Heh! Seeing Hermione pinch Lucius is a good sign; she's not afraid to tell him he's being a twit, and he's reluctantly learning to admit when he's wrong. I love their interaction when he discovered what she was reading. What is the #2 item she will be doing? I also like seeing the group working together, and wonder if Neville's grandmother has noticed anything, since she is Pureblood. Thanks for the new chapter!!
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So it has occurred to me that I haven't been reviewing. And for that I must apologize as I feel quite a bit embarrassed about that. I just wanted to let you know that I get so excited whenever I see an update for this story, it's one of my favorites. I also want to let you know how much I appreciate the fact that you don't have Lucius and Hermione just falling into love immediately. I'm loving the slow progression of their feelings. Personally I think it helps me as a reader to also build on my feelings of them as a couple, I can see how they're slowly coming to love one another (though they aren't quite there yet) and it just makes the story that much more wonderful. Anyway, I just wanted to review and let you how fantastic I think this story is.

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