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I feel pretty sorry for Hermione at this point, and just a little for Lucius. It looks like he might be able to bully an apology out of her, but at the loss of trust that he can't afford if he wants to have a happy life with her. I guess communication is hardest for anyone to achieve, and Lucius and Hermione are both guilty of not exercising it. Am looking forward to seeing how they can get over this barrier.

Chapter 10: SO I read the new chapter just before Im about to leave for work. So all day long I will be trying to handle priceless artifacts while imagining a genie sprouting from Lucius Malfoy's backside....knowing that if I had him naked and in a position to conjure such a genie there would be no wish to make because id already have what I wanted...a naked Lucius. =)

Nice chapter, Hermione deserved her punishment, shes a stubborn little bint with a wicked temper and a mean streak. As far as forced marriages go it could have been worse, at least he gives her pleasure, he could be a jerk and withhold it just for spite.

So on to red bottomed loving and unsheathed claws...tally-ho!


Happy Writing!
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Poor dears, so both misunderstood. Why do I see Hermione getting her own back in the future?

Hi,

just discovered Adultfanfiction.net and YOUR storys! Awsome! But why does Hermione suffer so much? Will it be true to the title and Hermione always be the one going to be taken down? Does she get a bit revenge? She has the brains!
I wonder if I am the only one who wants a good backstabbing of Lucius. I know wanted to just wanted to murder him, let him suffer...much...very much.
I hope I got the English right, tis not my mother tongue.
Thank you for always finishing your storys.

Why can't she just escape out of this marriage and let Lucius be? I think for an independent person and smart like Hermione, she found something to get out and get her freedom back.

AMAGAH! I love this story, keep updating I want MOAR! Hehe everything was perfect, although I'm not sure I liked chapter 10 as much as the rest, it was a bit..strange. Ps, I hope the next few chapters are all sex-filled :D I nearly died after every little sexual innuendo in the first couple of chapters - I wanted more. But you wrote it very well, made me want to read on. A great job all-in-all I shall be watching this for updates!

I'm feeling sorry for Hermione. I wanted her to whip her wand out and slam Lucius into the wall when he called her a mudblood again. I do hope she tells Lucius how she is feeling or he uses Legilimens. Maybe she could challenge him to a duel.

Is there more in this story aside from blackmailing, humilitating and raping a girl?
Someone should kill Lucius, slowly and painfully.

Wow. I know wizarding marriages are forever (and stuck in the dark ages if a husband is allowed to punish his wife as he sees fit) but as much as a spanking can be fun, this one would not have been. And if I were Hermione, it would have set our relationship, whatever there was of it back a long time.

So what you're saying is that the best way to win someone over to your way of thinking in marriage is to frighten them and hurt them. Shakes head. Lucius is a lot brighter than that.