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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great, I love the story!
Only 5 or 6 more chapters,too sad!!
Only 5 or 6 more chapters,too sad!!
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooo.... smirks can't wait to see the next update..
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter <3
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read more. thanks for sharing
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic so i hope u update soon:) its really good and i would have never expected this to be your first hp fic until u said it was!!! so great job!!!:)
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August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I see a great deal of potential in the story but I am having troble reading it with the typos you have. I would love to help you with those and try my hand at being a beta. Please contact me so we can work together to make this better.
amber.and.the.kids@gmail.com
amber.and.the.kids@gmail.com
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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great update, can't wait for more!
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's an interesting story. I've never reviewed before because I never bothered to read it before.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
BTW: some of the tenses of your words are off. (ex. He calls, instead of He called)
= Pick a tense and stick with it.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
BTW: some of the tenses of your words are off. (ex. He calls, instead of He called)
= Pick a tense and stick with it.
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh!! my my! sexy lucius malfoy!
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Rawr!!I love the feisty Harr!