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for Mystery of You

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person katiekrm
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I did not even know that Ed McMann died. How sad is that? Michael Jackson's Thriller album was the first cassette tape I ever owned. I am very sad about Farrah. I grew up watching Charlie's Angels reruns. Great chapter. I love tender Lucius.
person Rainie
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how the whole school thing is going to go. Her friends are going to flip when they see her with Lucuis. Can't wait for that scene. Thanks and Happy Writing
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay, so I just finished chapter five, and I am utterly enthralled. I'm mainly a HG/SS girl and have only recently begun to read HG/LMs. But oh, MAN are you ever on to something here. I love the whole concept. love love LOVE it... please keep writing! When I'm done here, I'll mosey over to your member profile and see what other wonders you've posted.

Truly, you rock. I'm so jazzed about keeping up with this fic!
person Robs
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great last few chapters! I like your Lucius. He's quite unstable really, but Hermione is grounding him a bit. I like Severus as well. I wonder what's going to happen when she sees her friends again? Look forward to the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure which is hotter- a sauced and sexually aggressive Lucius... or a protective Snape. *mouth waters* YUM. On to the next chapter I go :oD
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 9: Oh dear, Lucius was really gutted by Luna
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok!! Bring it on!!!!!! This is so much fun.............
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the whole greyback admission was seriously shocking -- did he rape her? it wasn't clear...oh lord. ron is an idiot.

so Lucius can't explain the attraction and possessiveness...
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Lucius had better not be losing his snarky, dommish, bad-ass edge....this soft Lucius is a bit disconcerting. I do love Luna and how funny about Draco. So where does that leave Pansy? Such a tangled web you've woven.
person shelagh
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Execellent job with Luna! I love the way you write her. Could we possibly have a longer chapter please? I don't mean to sound greedy but I am enjoying this story.

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