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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I want to kick Harry so very much.

Great story, can't wait to see how it progresses.
person kunitsu
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was an interesting change for Harry. As for now I dont want to get my hopes up, he still might change to bad Harry again.
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm 23 (going on 24) and I know exactly how it feels to need reading glasses! I just hope Harry will change some of his attitudes towards Sev. And btw, wouldn't the reading glasses be a reward of sorts? I understand the gown, but the reading glasses baffle me...
person Nilla
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story :) I love it. I hope things will work out for Sev, and that he and Harry might come to an understanding one day... How many parts do you reckon this'll have? ^^
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story!

and that is not a turning 40 thing because I am 35 and I have needed reading glasses since I was 14, it has something to do with the way I read.
person Nikte
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I want to kick Harry, how can he be so blind? when will he keep blaming Severus for things he has nothing to do with, I mean, if all his friends are giving him the cold shoulder was for his decision of taking Severus as his charge, I
person lucy
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great update soon
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for Snape. Harry needs to have some sense beaten into him!
person kunitsu
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its nice that there are some good things that are happening to Severus, great update btw
person abbicee
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I have to say you are hitting two of my kinks with this fic, mpreg and slave fic. LOL, you're hitting a big third with the fact it is Snape who is the slave and pregnant. Harry is being narrow minded in his thinking of Snape and you would think he'd start to rethink some of his prejudices in view of the fact that his friends are so against his plans. Well, hopefully time will mellow him. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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